CTS
Week 22: Structuring my essay and writing it
At first, my plan was even as detailed as the version above, however after starting to write the essay, a lot of ideas that I was trying to convey became a lot clearer.
At this point I wrote around 800 words, almost half way through, so like my tutor (Billie) keep encouraging everyone to go to academic support group, I booked one.
I was quite nervous, because I didn’t do too well on my previous CTS essay, but I did look at my marker’s comment and tried my best to improve on what she mentioned.
So I told the support lecturer about what I feel I need to improve on such as the tone in my writing or doing in-text citation. She gave me a list of connecting words as well as a presentation on citations which I feel could be useful when I’m proofreading the essay later.
She also read my essay and help point out parts that is difficult to understand. Other than she only gave constructive criticism so I felt quite good after the session.
However, I do wonder if she is going easy on me or if my essay is actually written quite well already.